homework thing

1. I feel that I am somewhat understanding of the fact that inquiry is the beginning and end of all writing.
2. I do not feel that I understand that the nature of inquiry.
3. I understand the connection of inquiry and audience almost completely.
4. I understand the connections from inquiry, argument, and audience.
5. I understand that practice writing in a ongoing process.
6. I get that using primary research for appropriate to the rhetorical situation.
7. I have the ability to work well with others.
8. I have confidence in writing throught inquiry and exploration
9. I take responsibility for my own progress

1. I feel like I am all right at discussing and analyzing the role of inquiry in reading. I could be better at it though.
2. I feel like I could improve with discussing and analyzing visual and verbal texts.
3. Yes this I feel this has been accomplished. Prewriting has become important in writing an essay.
4. We have had many papers that we have revised.
5. I know that we need good supporting evidence for our writing.
6. We have written more than 4 papers. I used good techniques in all of these.
7. I have yet to look back at my work to see what I need to fix.

1. I try to learn everything I can so that I can be as intelligent as possible.
2. Communication is very important and I can communicate with other people well.
3. I have my values and others have there’s and that’s fine.
4. I try to find solutions for common problems everyday.
5. I feel that I can work well with others so finding answers to life’s common problems is no problem
6. I have my own style and own mind and I feel like I learn more about myself everyday and am able to express my feelings.

piercings

i dont no what it is but i keep piercing my ears. i got my cartilage done with a industrial bar today and i really like it. I want to get more piercings but i dont have any money..... i spent it all on other.... stuff. But ya i need money

Outline for class

Intro: Why are the smoking sections so close to the dorm rooms?

Thesis: People who don't smoke shouldn't have to smell smoke and people who want to smoke should be able to smoke in a some what convenient way.

1.Smoking sections
a.They are too close to the dorm rooms
b.here are not enough of them
c.he area is to small for la
2.Too Close to the dorm rooms
a. Smoke goes into peoples windows when they have them open
b.Walking out of the dorms you get nice fresh smoky air
3.There are not enough of them
a.People who smoke "need" to smoke at certain times but sometimes there is no smoking section near where you are.
4.The area is too small for la
1. Freshmen that live in la smoke alot and there isn't enough room to have a nice smoke break from studying because you can hear everyone talking
2.Easy fix just move the smoking section to a larger area that isn't near the dorm rooms
3. More benches so you can sit down

Kidney stones

So this weekend was prob the worst weekend of my life haha. First of all i went home and it was extremely boring there wasn't a thing to do for 3 days. I also visited my best friends mother who showed me a video of my best friends bro wedding that i was invited to but wasnt told what day it was so i didnt go. and i was watching the video and saw a guy i knew from back home that was friends with my best friend. I then realized that he took him over me and i was pretty mad about it. Then i went home and was driving around with my friend carl and i started to pass a kidney stone. The most pain i have ever been in. I went to the ER and got checked out and they didnt even give me any meds before i passed the stone. So i left the hospitle with no meds no treatment nothing... except a 80 dollar bill. for staying there for an hour and half. Feeling used i went home and sat on my bed. Then a girl that i have been talkin to came over with out me knowing she was coming and chilled with me so that made most of it better... .but it still sucked.... so that was my weekend how was yours haha

Birthday

Monday was my birthday and it was the dumbest day of my life. First of all im 19 now, the 2nd useless age ever created. The only age that is more useless is 20 which is my next birthday for all of you who cant count. So much to look forward to. haha But overall my birthday was pretty cool i met a really cool girl who iv been talkin to for the past week. I got a bunch of random crap from my parents who came to see me on sunday. So it was an alright day, and i still dont get why we celebrate birthdays... it seems more and more depressing the older you get

Ethos Pathos Logos

The Article i read was about OJ Simpson. They established their creditability on how well they know the trial. They appeal to the audiences emotions by giving quotes of both the defendant and the prosecution. They do a bad job with making the article appealing, because they dont take a side on the subject. They try to make both sides of the trial seem like they are right. Which everyone knows that OJ did it.

Randomness

So im sitting here drunk off random drugs because im sick. Dont get me wrong there not illegal and im not really drunk lol. But i cant stop thinking that im need to do something but i cant figure out what it is. I know i need to blog about my letter the editor but im not sure what to blog about, like do i just write what i think about it or something. But ya im going to find another article cuz my other one sucks. I hope i make it to class on monday. Cuz i need to feel better. Im out

Sick

Today I am sick... I woke up and went to class only because if i missed the class i would most likely fail because we were taking a test. Then after that class i went to my theater class and signed in and left and went back to the dorm and slept. I then at around like 2 threw up so thats why im not in class today.... I hope where not doing anything important. Hopefully Mr. McArdle will go off on a bunny trail for the whole class.... I think I have a good chance of that haha. But anyway if anyone reads this leave a comment on what we do today. Thanks

Guitar hero

The things i have learned from playing guitar hero 3. I am the most persistent person i know. I have been trying to beat through the fire and flames on expert for like 3 weeks. I have gotten to 97 percent prob 5 times. I have played this song so many times that at the start of the song i can do all the notes with out looking at the screen. I just thought that if i would have spent this much time playing a real guitar i could prob start a band or something. Wow South park was so right in there guitar hero episode. But the real reason why i wrote this is because i know now that i can never fail at something, and if i do i will keep tying till i get it right. Persistence is my greatest trait and yet my biggest flaw.

Articles

So im still not sure what im going to do my letter to the editor on. I've been looking at articles online for a while and still have yet to find one that i find interesting. So i will keep looking for one. I really want to do one on the economy because it is in the shit hole so i was hoping to give my input to someone, regardless of my lack of knowledge in ecomonics. In fact i got a d in that class in high school. haha. But anyway i think i have found one so im hoping that it will work.